移民类雅思写作：怎么用英语找房租房？（外教范文+范文朗读）
爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个General IELTS移民类雅思写作范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，Mac范文
3，范文朗读
4, 范文解析
上题：
You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter
- introduce yourself and your family
- describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
- give your preference for the location of the accommodation
审题：
- Type: formal 正式
- Key words: introduce/describe accommodation/request and preference
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
▲范文音频戳这里▲
To Whom It May Concern:
This letter is in reference to an information email I received from your company last week.
I plan to move with my family to your city in two months’ time, and so I would like to inquire more specifically about what types of housing your company offers and to get a better idea of the amenities in the areas of available and suitable accommodation.
Our first concern is the proximity and vicinity of available schools for our son, and the second is affordability. We hope to find a 3-bedroom fully-furnished condo with study and balcony, in a quiet area, and as alluded to above, near a good school. Ideally, a condominium-style community would be best. For price range, we would be looking for a year-long commitment at between £1,500-2,000/month.
We are good tenants as attested to by the 2 references from former landlords I have attached. Thank you in advance for taking the time to assist us in finding suitable housing to rent.
Sincerely yours,
Roberto Quigmen
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard Phrases:
- To Whom It May Concern:
- This letter is in reference to
- I would like to inquire (about)
- to get a better idea of (about)
- Our first concern is
- would be best
- would be looking for
- Thank you in advance for taking the time to
- Sincerely yours
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- more specifically about 更具体
- types of housing 房屋类型
- amenities 生活设施
- proximity （时间或空间）接近，邻近，靠近
- vicinity 周围地区
- affordability 可负担性
- a 3-bedroom …
- fully-furnished 带家具
- condo (condominium) 公寓
- a condominium-style community 公寓社区
- price range 价格区间
- a year-long commitment 一年合同/租期
- tenants 房客
- attested to 作证
- references 推荐信
- landlords 房东
Cohesion (C&C words and phrases):
- This
- last week
- plan to
- in two months’ time
- , and so
- what
- and to get
- first
- is
- , and the second is
- hope to
- , and as alluded to above,
- Ideally,
- For
- looking for
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